What a wonderful surprise on a less than perfect day.
Poor Dean - having to decide what to do about Sam. As soon as he gave Sammy painkillers on an empty stomach I was worried - you did a great job of building the suspense.
I find myself arguing with John and yelling suggestions at the computer - that's perfectly normal, right?
Your description of teenage Sam & how he feels about his family is the way I always pictured it. Trying to be as strong and capable as his father & brother despite the fact he was so much younger and hated their life. Even when he was trying to fit in he was still being strong willed and independent.
Now... could we have the next chapter please? How are they going to rewire his jaw? How will they keep him fed and on drugs and not vomiting? *is impatient & greedy*
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Date: 2008-05-24 11:23 pm (UTC)Poor Dean - having to decide what to do about Sam. As soon as he gave Sammy painkillers on an empty stomach I was worried - you did a great job of building the suspense.
I find myself arguing with John and yelling suggestions at the computer - that's perfectly normal, right?
Your description of teenage Sam & how he feels about his family is the way I always pictured it. Trying to be as strong and capable as his father & brother despite the fact he was so much younger and hated their life. Even when he was trying to fit in he was still being strong willed and independent.
Now... could we have the next chapter please? How are they going to rewire his jaw? How will they keep him fed and on drugs and not vomiting? *is impatient & greedy*