jinx- I think you and I must have mind-melded

Date: 2014-05-04 02:52 am (UTC)
When I saw this, I busted up laughing! It's like we were one with the Marvel universe! I was compelled by my muse to write a venting rant deathfic. I love Ward and the Ward/Skye relationship, but I have to admit that when he turned seemingly dark, I was crushed and hence the birth of my story. I only see a bad end for Ward after all he's done and how many people he has killed so as per predictably usual and you know me, I killed him off. I'd prefer that to him becoming misguidedly evil as Mike Peterson has become as Deathlok.

I love how in your story you're showing the progression of events through Fitz's eyes. You captured how the world he used to know has changed and not at all for the better. There is a palpable loss in his realization thaw Ward is a traitor.


Fave part:

(He can’t help but think of all the times Ward saved his life. He can’t help but think of the respect he gained in Ward’s eyes and how much that meant to him. He can’t help but think of the good times.
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

December 2021

S M T W T F S
   1234
56 7891011
1213 1415161718
19 20 2122 23 2425
26 2728293031 

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 15th, 2025 11:48 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios