This is bloody brilliant! It makes total sense that the one thing to get through to Stephen would be Nick getting hurt. And there are countless lovely touches in the fic - that image of Stephen running and swimming and climbing because he had all that time in the past is very strong.
Two Brit points - it's truncheon and not nightstick. And tasers aren't routine equipment for British police. It's like guns - they'd only be authorised in special situations.
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Date: 2012-12-07 06:47 am (UTC)Two Brit points - it's truncheon and not nightstick. And tasers aren't routine equipment for British police. It's like guns - they'd only be authorised in special situations.